Productive and Critical Day

Today has been very helpful, I received some well needed feedback from a group tutorial with the post-it notes really helping in my development. After showing my designs to the tutorial group I understood that I needed to adjust column widths, adjust the text heavy spread one. The photo also didn’t work as well as hoped relating to the text but not necessarily balancing with other elements.

Have been through many different developed designs today, and I think I am almost there with the layout. Not sure whether they will suit in my piece but I may use photo’s that I take in london tomorrow in my layout and experiment with those. 

Feedback Appreciated…