General feedback was it’s heading in the right direction, just aspects such as the logo need to be adjusted.
Yo Phiiil was said to have reminded them of the fast food chain, which was what I thought at first, but the colour scheme and design were liked. Suggestions were made that I should consider using my initials in the design or name.
little niggly bits such as the use of some wording in the bottom copyright marker were brought up. But overall a constructive crit, which helped push me further in the right direction.